Writing Week 10



  1. What do you think Santa's elves do on their day off? Write a story about an elf that gets into some kind of trouble on his day off.
  2. The Prediction Key What presents will you want for Christmas in 5 years time?

20 comments:

  1. McKenzie and Mum5 December 2015 at 19:58

    Yay it was RosieThe Elfs day off work. She had been working very hard helping Santa and her little elf friends make lots of toys and games for all the good children around the world. Rosies favourite thing was to go clothes shopping ( yes there is a mall in the north pole - just use your imagination.) Rosie set off the, she had $100 to spend. Rosie had lots of things she wanted buy, a new dress, shoes, a skirt and top, togs. Rosie wasn't very good at maths so she hoped she had enough money for all those things. She got to the mall and found her favourite shop. She started trying on all sorts of clothes, she brought a dress, togs and a top. Out of $100 she only had $20 left, rosie was feeling hungry so she decided to have some lunch. While Rosie was having lunch she spied a new make up shop. She finished her lunch and went over to have a look, she found a nail polish she liked and got it, she only had $2 left but she had seen a lipstick she wanted. She picked it up and looked at it and thaught I reaaly need this lipstick, no one was looking so she snuck it in her pocket, but there was someone watching, the shop owner. Rosie started walking out of the shop when suddenly someone yelled hey you, Rosie stopped and turned red, she knew what he was going to say so she put her hand in her pocket and got the lipstick out and handed it to the man. He said it was a very naughty and thing to do so he just told her off and told her not to come back to the shop again, she new she would get in trouble when she got back as santa is magic and knows everything.


    In 5 years time I would like money so then I could buy my own clothes and makeup.

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  2. After months of hard work, Lucy was very, very tired. She had been working way to hard this year so she got to have a day off and she had $150 to spend. There was this new mall in the North Pole so she set off to buy some stuff. She was a very good calculator because she was the calculator for all the children of the world!! Well half or quarter. Ok so there were these rules in the front door of the mall saying:
    No Stealing! No bad language! No smoking! Definitely NO PETS! (Cause there is a lot of shops and the pet might go crazy!!) Lucy was very sad that there was no pets because she just brought her kitten called Lala. "Never mind," she thought "I will just sneak Lala." So she just brought Lala in her handbag. She was very small so she could fit. Lucy was so excited there were Fashion stuff, Electronics and way to much more!! It was like a paradise filled with shops! She first went to buy some make up. After shopping for some make up she had $130. Lucy thought very hard " What should I get next, oh I know I would want to get some new clothes!" So she went and bought some dresses, t-shirts, pants, skirts and shorts. By the time she finished buying clothing she only had $95. Again she thought hard, "What should I buy next..." A loud rumble awoke her thoughts, "I know I will get food." She cried. She bought smoothie, biscuits and cake! After the whole feast she accidentally opened her handbag and Lala went... Whoosh! The next thing was when one of the mall manager was picking the out of control kitten and giving it to Lucy. " You should obey the laws elf!" He said firmly. " You know the rules!" Luckily she apologised and would never ever disobey the law and luckily she had no punishment because she worked way to hard. The End

    In 5 years time I would like more New books, ( I read to much!) New electronics and New clothes.


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  3. And a pet and gymnastics equipment.

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  4. One day there was an elf named Dan he it was his day off working for Santa. So he went to the mall and he saw a little toy van so he laughed because he just realised van raimed with Dan "Van , Dan" he was walking out of the shop he thought no one had seen but a little boy yelled "he you have to pay for that van!" then Dan was sent back to work and he didn't get the van. THE END

    In 5 years time I would be 13 so I would want money $$$$$so I can buy the new devices and whatever I want :)

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  5. Millie the elf was very excited, finally it was her day off. She had already planned what she would do today. She would go to Santa's north pole train station and would ask the train driver if she could drive the train - just for day. So, when the clock struck nine o'clock, she raced off to the train station to ask the train driver permission to drive.
    She arrived at the platform and said to the driver "Can I please drive your train for one day?" He said "Yes, you can. You can take these odd looking toys to the south pole". Some of these toys were weird and peculiar with tails on their heads and some even had noses on their chins. Millie hopped inside straight away forgetting to ask for driving lessons. The train doors closed. Millie looked at the controls, there were two buttons, one that said 'ON' and the other said 'OFF', but there were no buttons which said 'FAST' or 'SLOW'. Millie pushed the button which said 'ON' and the train raced off. She arrived at the first intersection and Millie thought she was heading for the south pole, but instead she turned down the wrong track and raced towards Hokitika. Little did Millie know that the track was being repaired and the broken section ended in a massive mud puddle. What Millie did know was she still couldn't figure out how to stop the train, so she just went flying into the big muddy puddle. Millie & all the toys were ok, just covered in lots of mud. Millie the naughty little elf was never allowed to drive the train again and spent her days off reading in the sun or playing with her friends.

    In 5 years time I would like a newer faster computer and a proper piano.

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  6. A Elf called Lola had a day off she was sooo happy that she finally got her day off and she went to the stables to ride roldoph he really needed exercise and then she went to ride roldoph but then santa said "hoho we need to get going because it is Christmas night lets get a move on" but she didn't here santa because she was already flying in the skys. Then santa came to get the reindeers ready for flying but there was no roldoph in sight. Then it was 29 hours later so santa got the sligh ready and left without roldoph so it was a rocky ride but he only got to go to 2 places in the world! but when he was going home sadly he came across Lola he was very angry when saw Lola on roldph and then she never worked again


    In 5 years time I would want make up and a new phone and lots of money.

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  7. It was Bobs day off and he was really excited so he decided to go to the sports shop to get something so at 10:00 he set off to the sports shop. When he got there he was so happy so he started to look at some Neymar and Ronaldo's tops and shorts and some ruby and soccer balls then he saw a fully kited out striker lewandonski set with some boots a ball a top and a sports towel he only had 500 to spend so he bought it then he went to the apple shop he really wanted a new elfatron 5000 but it was 500! dollars so he decided to just take it so he stuffed it in his bag and ran out the police went after her she turned the corner they were waiting for her she gave up she gave them the device and then they told her she wasn't allowed to to visit the store again so she went home sad.

    in five years I want a new phone and some goal keeper gloves

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  8. Brennanrennan and mum9 December 2015 at 17:38

    A elf named Brennan had a day off and he didn't know what to do, it was a nice day so he decided to go outside and play with his rugby ball. He was walking past Santa's house and he saw Santa's motorbike parked outside his house ,he always wanted to ride it and no one was around so he jump on and started it up. The motorbike was going real fast and he went to go round the corner but he crashed into Santa's workshop .Santa and the other elfs came out to see what theloud noise was,Santa was so angry at Brennan for taking his bike and crashing it that he was aloud anymore days off till after christmas

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  9. Brennanrennan and mum9 December 2015 at 17:45

    Ment that he wasn't aloud any more days off till after christmas

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  10. gamer boss tiaki9 December 2015 at 19:48

    A elf named George had the day of so he decided to go to the new snowmobile track he hoped on the fastest one he went full Throttle and he crashed it he was in big trouble and was never aulwued to go there ever again.


    In 5 years time I will be 15 I would like a phone, gta6, ps4.

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  11. Anna the Elf woke up it was her day off and she said "yay" what am I going to do today?.
    She decided to go Christmas Shopping so she got her walking shoes on and headed to the Mall to do a little bit of shopping.
    First she went to the Make-up shop to get some lipstick, mascara, face powder and eyeshadow all in lovely Christmas colours.
    Next she went to the toy shop where she had a look around before she came across so awesome collectable Elf Dolls but they were really expensive and she didn't have enough money to pay for them all, so she brought what she could afford.
    Then went home because she had to feed the reindeer, she realised she was hungry and by accident ate all the carrots "oh no what am I going to do now" she said I am going to be in such trouble.
    Then Santa came to check on the reindeer to see if they had enough to eat and were ready for there big trip around the world when he came across Anna crying because she had eaten all the carrots, he asked her what was wrong and she said she had eaten all the carrots by accident and she was scared she would be in trouble but Santa said 'Don't worry Anna you are a good elf and I have plenty of carrots in the fridge out the back' so they both went out and got them and feed the reindeer together. The End

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  12. In five years time I would like a motorbike.

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  13. one day there was an elf that liked to go shopping. so one day he went shopping he saw a sport shop he really liked sport so he went in. then he saw a top that he liked so he got it. but he thought he needed pants to go with it.so he got some pants.then he got a jerse then he got a hat but he dident have a enough for shoes he thought if he put them on no one would notes put the shop owner did he sad put them back so he did. then he realised that elfs need shoes with a sharp bit at the end and that dident.



    in 5years time I would like a full size soccer goal and a phone

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  14. One day there lived a little elf and her name was Melissa. She had a week off work and she decided to go to the ski field. It was her first time skiing and she kept on bumping into everyone and everyone was yelling out hey you slow down but she couldn't control herself. Melissa decided to get ski lessons so she would bump into everyone. After that week had past she had to go back and help Santa get ready for Christmas.

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  15. PYPERN17 AND PYPERN17 IS COOL9 December 2015 at 21:46

    In 5 years time I sill want my little pony (hehe) my own ipad and I am the boss of it and mum and dad are not and my own iPhone and ipod!.

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  16. Mary was a bad elf she liked to put worn pants on other elves
    heads when they were asleep. she thought santa did not know that...One day she woke up really early aha there was santa snoring in tyhre next room hmm.. she thought soon she was fully dressed uh I need some new clothes and santa won't give me them he sezz
    'clothes do not make the elf'
    so she snuck in santas room and stole all his gold I wonder were he gets them from maybe he's a robber she wondered aloud so she went outside she stole his slay got a reinder and rode away. soon she was at the nearst city wow she thought I should do this more often. she got to the mall parked the slay in the car park and walked right on in to the clothes store ooohhhhhhhhh look. she had spotted a red dress in it went gowns, dress's tops, shoes, then she was about to go and pay when the money went down a small hole oh but she had brought shrinking magic so in she went down she went in the hole but she did not notice some one cover the hole entrance when she came back up with the money the hole was blocked oho then santa a peared this will serve you right for stealing M ary he said but hhow but he was gone mary cried but it was no good and there she sztayed she thought nasty thoughts but she never got back.

    in 5 years I would like money to buy things with.

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  17. There was an elf called Sum. Santa Claues let Sum have a day off. He was bored so he made a lot of presents and got Santa's sleigh and Rodof. Sum was very naughty because with Santa's sleigh, sum went around the world without telling Santa. At the north pole, Santa was looking for Sum and Rodof to do a special job. He couldn't find them but then santa remembered about his crystal ball. It was a tool to find things that were gone missing. He saw Sum flying around the countries giving gifts to the kids. When they got back Santa was mad at Sum. Then Santa had a big talk with Sum and he got grounded. After the talk Santa checked his crystal ball to see if everyone was happy and then santa was shocked because everyone was enjoying thier presents and they were so filled with joy. The End


    IN FIVE YAERS TIME I want nerf the rinofire and the doominater and a phone.















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  18. One day Ellie the elf was on her day off.Then Ellie thought she should go to the the moll so she did.When she was at the moll and she saw a dress that is perfect for a little girl but...
    IT WAS $100 DOLLERS !!!.Then an idea came to her so she stoled the dress and the elf police men so her steling it and
    he ran to Ellie and said "Ellie you know the rules", and Ellie said "sorry",.

    in 5 years i would like a makeup set.

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  19. One day Bob had a day of and he only had 50$ note but there was a neymar top for 51$ dollars so he stoll but he got caught and he had to give it back.

    in five years I woud want a premier league ball size 5.

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  20. There was a elf called Vicky it was her day off she was so happy she had 50 dollors so she went to have lunch then she went to the shop and brough two candy bars then she went to another shop an she had 47 dollors so she went to the warehouse and brought 3 sparkle girls she had 29 left so she saved the rest of the money so she went back to the work shop the end

    In five years time I would get a I phone

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