Writing Week 6

This is the Christmas advert for Sainsbury's supermarket chain  in the United Kingdom.

Watch Mog's Christmas Calamity and then write a report on what happened written by Mog the Cat.



You can report on what actually happened or it can be completely made up by Mog to show it was not her fault.

Well it started like this...

20 comments:

  1. Christmas eve I woke up and saw that there was smoke coming from the oven so I went to have a look and smoke went all in my face. Everything I did just made a bigger mess. The clock squashed the presents and the lights on the tree broke and then all the leaves came off the tree. Lucky I had accidentally called the fire service. We thought there was no Christmas for us but then our neighbours shared their Christmas with my family and then I got my egg.

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  2. It was Christmas Eve and I was having a nightmare. I jumped on the stove and saw smoke coming from the oven. The smoke got in my eyes.I jumped on the phone and by a miracle I rung the fire service. I jumped on the table and that pulled all the food and things on the ground. The clock fell on the chrismas tree and the lights had a little spark so that burnt the Christmas tree, it was just getting worse and worse but when I went outside the fireservice was pulling up. I thaught there would be no Christmas but the neighbours came to the rescue.

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  3. It was the middle of Christmas and I was just asleep in my bed when I heard the pans on the stove rattling and crashing. So I woke up to try and stop them from making such a loud noise and accidentally banged into one of the pots. It sent the other pots crashing down too. I got scared and when I was trying to escape I stepped onto the phone and dialled 999. Then a voice came from the phone "hello, fire service". I got such a fright I leapt onto the table cloth then everything came crashing down. A lot more disasters happened, like the beer bottle exploded because I stepped on it and the Christmas tree lights fell down. What a mess. I felt so guilty I ran outside with the Christmas lights attached to my foot in front of the fire brigade. The more I tried the worse it got, but the fire brigade found the turkey on fire on the stove inside the house. As it worked out, because of me and my disasters I had actually saved the day! So with friends and neighbours helping we still had a good Christmas.

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  4. It was Christmas eve and I was having terrible nightmare. When I was asleep a ball from the shelf rolled down and hit the turn on button on the stove. The next morning smoke was everywhere! I was so frightened that I crashed into pots and plates it was so loud I got even more frightened. Then I saw the phone and tried to jump over it but I accidentally dialled 999. Then a voice came from the phone, " Hello, fire service." I was so frightened that I leaped onto the table and ripped the table cloth down and it also send all the plates, cups and all the other thing onto the floor. Again I was so scared that I accidentally jumped back onto the stove and jumped onto the grand clock. Then for some reason beer bottle exploded because I accidentally stepped on it and it exploded right onto the electric thing which was connected to the lights of the tree it all fell down!! I was so guilty I ran outside with the lights tangled on my bushy tail. Luckily the fire brigade came and set all the fire out. I still felt guilty but the owners of the house thought that I saved the day! We were sad that we didn't get to go to out house to do all the Christmassy things so our neighbours invited us to their place to have Christmas. We had a great time!!!

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  5. ok I kind of think it was Mogs fault but she kind of saved everyone at the same time and you cannot chose what you dream its just Mogs basket should not have been there in there Mogs side of the storey would be...
    I was having a bad bad dream which of course was set by someone I did not start the fire nor did my tail ok Mog kind of gave herself away but...
    I did get the fire engine to come plus the noubours were very kind

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  6. towards the end there is writing that said Sainsbury's which is a shop in UK that sells clothes,shoes,hand bags, and food it is one of the main super markets there.

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  7. tiakitakitakitakitakitaki15 November 2015 at 21:11

    It was the night before x-mas mog was having a nightmare he hade his tail tangled he jiggled his tail and made A cricket ball it roled a it hit the on switch and it made the turkey go on fire and acsadentley dials 999 a nuts started shooting eyewear and his tail got tangled again and smashed thro the cat flap and got scared by the fire truck.

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  8. Mog had rewind everything luckily everyone hawped!!!

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  9. Oh no we just lost all of Sophie's big long story.

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  10. ollie is boom a boom16 November 2015 at 10:18

    It was z-mas eve and mog was having a terabile nightmare and in the moring ther was smock caming from the aven and mog called on acsadentle called 999 then the fire thrack came. THE END

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  11. it was x-mas and Me ( mog ) was having a nightmare and my tail pulled the fairy lights down. and that pushed all the books and stuff down and a ball turned on the oven. Then I woke up and he saw all the smoke coming from the oven he went over and then it went all in her face. She walked back wards and then she tipped everything over and then she called 999 but it was on acsedint and the it said hello fire service. But then I jumped on the table but I didn't get onto all of it, then all of the food and the cloth came off but I just got on the table. Then I somehow got on the fan! Then it spinned me right around then I fell off then I got on the clock then it started to tip over and it made a fire and burned down the tree! and the fire service came and a person got the chicken and it was burned and then I got a egg with the neighbors and we had Christmas with our neighbors.

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  12. It was Christmas eve and I was having bad nightmares. I got my tail tangled up to the Chistmas lights. I pulled back my tail whick knocked over a ball and bounced onto the oven and switched it on. A strange smell woke me up. It was the smell oven. Was it something over cooked?? Smoke went everywhere and I started crashing into things. I stood on the phone and press 9 three times for the firebrigade. The fire spread and everyone had to go outside. The firebrigade was here to take out the fire. The fire started with this overcook chicken. We went back inside but we felt sad because everything was burnt down. Neighbours came and helped the poor family fix their home. After that hard work it was time to have Christmas dinner so everyone gathered . Yay my favourite food eggs! This was a good Christmas.

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  13. it was Christmas eve, I woke up and saw lots of smoke so I went over and I sliped it opened the and lots of smoke came out then I pessed 999 and the firethruck came. but they hade there Christmas with freand.

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  14. It was Christmas eve and MOG had a nightmare and shok his tail and it got tangled and MOG woke up and jumped on top of the oven then open something and smoke came out a went into his face and he ran across the phone and dialed 999 and the fireservis answerved the phone ànd he got a big frit and ran all around the house and ruined everything and he ran outside and the fireservis showed up and then the family came home and looked inside and everything was ruined and the mother cryed then the neighbors came over and said they will share there Christmas with them

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  15. It wasn't my fault... Honest. It was the next door neighbours dog. He set me up. I was just having a lovely dream when I woke up to Bruno running around causing chaos in the kitchen. He was hungry so he turned the oven on to cook the turkey. I was just hiding in my basket staying out of trouble. Then he started to chase me so I tried to jump on the table and then the ceiling fan. I rang 999 to come and rescue me and it was lucky I did or the whole house would've burnt down. So Actually I am a hero and I am waiting for my bravery medal. honest...

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  16. Brennanrennan and mum19 November 2015 at 02:41

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  17. Brennanrennan and mum19 November 2015 at 02:42

    Christmas eve I woke up and saw that smoke was coming out of the oven, I went to have a look but every thing that I did made a bigger mess but lucky i dialed 999 when i ran over the phone and the fire service came and put out the fire. The presents tree and food was ruined the family was so sad. The neighbours came and cleaned the house and shared their Christmas with us, I got an egg yum yum.

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  18. Mog made a big mess , he accidentally set the whole house into mess, but there was the turkey in the oven was left and burning. He accidentally dial the fire service and save the whole house, but there was nothing left inside all was burned. Mog thought that there will be no Christmas , but the whole neighborhood showed up and each had something to give and help them. They said Mog deserved a medal , but he did deserved his favorite egg!.

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  19. I say it was half mog because the turcky was not his falt .

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  20. Mog was having a nightmare when my tail got tangled in the chirstmas lights which set of everything like some domino's and by accident turned the chicken on in the morning it was not a very good morning I didn't realise the chicken was on until I saw the smoke from the oven I tired to turn the oven off with my soft paws but I couldn't when I just up the lights were still hooked to my tail and this ruined the Christmas tree! Then I jumped on to the table and everything fell off including the eggs! I love eggs! Then I jumped onto the grand clock and that fell over, I was not having a good day. Then the oven fell open and the smoke filled the room and I ran outside thank goodness the fire truck arrived just as my family got out they went in and saved the house. The neighbours arrived and helped saved Christmas this is what Christmas is all about. The End

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