Writing Wk 7

This French movie clip has no dialogue (speaking). Write some dialogue for the movie that the boy and robot could be saying to each other. Choose one part of the movie to add speech to. Remember speech has speech marks "" and when a new person is talking they get a new line. Eg The robot said " where are we?" "Inside a big fish: the little boy replied. "I am scared" said the robot.

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  1. There was a little boy and a robot and the robot didn't have a light going inside him so he went to sleep. "oh no" said the boy while he went to fetch a light but there was one more left. He put in the light and the robot was alive. "Come follow me" said the boy and the robot followed him and the boy showed him that there was no more lights left. "Yay we get to go in the water and find more lights for you" said the boy "yay adventure" the robot said, and so they collected a bunch of lights, "look there is one more light left" the boy and the robot said at the same time. So then they grabbed the light but it didn't go off. "Huh? what's going on why isn't it going off" the boy said " I don't know but it must be a magic one". the robot said then all of a sudden a fish came and there was a million lights left so there on they just collected them from there.

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  2. Once upon a time there was a little boy and his toy robot. One day the robot ran out of lights for his eyes but luckily they had one more light left. The robot thought "Oh no, now we have to go into the sea where there is big fish and we might get eaten!" So they fearlessly went to the deep dark bottom of the sea but the poor robot said, "I'm scared and I want to go back!" They started to find some lights. But the last light they found would not come off its stick. It tuned out that it was a enormous scary fish, but he was friendly and he showed them millions of lights. The little boy said "Wow this is so cool". So from then on they always picked lights from there.

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  3. 'What's wrong little robot ' said the boy " I have no batteries for my lights" the little robot said "lets go and pick them from the battery plants in the bottom of the sea "said the boy "ok" said the little robot "ok" said the boy. The robot picked the last light but it was stuck "Oh no said the boy, Its stuck to a big fish" , the fish was friendly and then showed them heaps of lights. So the robot new where to come again when he needed more lights....

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  4. Once upon a time there was a boy and a robot. One day the robot lost lights. The boy only found one so they had to get more. There went deep into the water and got thousands of lights but the last one was a big fish. The boy said " Argh! This is fish is scary." Then the robot said " It might be a friendly fish." The robot was right! It was a friendly fish. The fish showed them lots and lots of lights. So from then on they picked lights from that area.
    The End

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  5. Once upon a time a boy and a robot were playing with some toys and then a light ran out and there was only one light left they hade to get more then a big fish swoloed them and there were lights inside him so they get millions of lights.

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  6. finn hihihihihihihihihi22 November 2015 at 21:01

    robot ran out of light they had only one light left so they went down to get some but they got one that wouldn't come of. it was a sea monster then they found lots of lights.

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  7. the robots light had run out they had to go and get more the boy said to the robot lets go and get more lights said the boy.
    ok said the robot lets go. soon the boy and the robot ( andre I have decied to call the boy that because I hate saying boy marcel is the robot )
    where getting lots of lights soon a big bad evil fish came by he thought they would make an amazing dinner he chased after them they could not find the way back they found loads of lights wow said andre yay said mercel

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  8. One day a robot and a boy the boy said 'this is cool' the robot went flat and fall down. And the boy grabbed a light and pot it in his head the robot came up the boy said 'come see this' .Then they went to find same the fond lots and there was one that it wouldn't came of 'sea monster' they said and got ate in them. THE END!!!!!!!!!!

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  9. ONE day there was a boy and robot they were playing with there toys but then there light went out "what will we do" said the boy then he looked in the light bulb cupboard and there was 1 light bulb left "we need to get more light bulbs"said the boy "okay"said the robot so they went to the ocean and got In there sub and went of when they got to the bottom they got some light bulbs but then a fish swallowed them they found lots of light bulbs. The End

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  10. A boy open the cabinet and found a light bulb and said " there it is! " . And he put it inside the robot and the robot got up and said "hi there". Then the boy said " come with me and lets get some more light bulbs in the deep sea." So they went out and get some more, until they have been swallowed by the big scary fish. Inside the big fish, there were so many light bulbs.

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  11. The boy and the robot where playing with the toys. Then the robot ran out of
    lights. And their was one left so they went and got more.

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  12. The boy and the robot were playing with their toys but the robot ran out of lights. Luckly the boy had one light left. They went to get some more lights for the robot in the sea. They got all the lights untill they came to a dark area with 1 light. The boy and the robot went to grab it but then a big fish swallowed them. ''Wow! There are a lot of light bulbs here!!'', said the boy. So if the the robot stops working, they could just get the lights inside the big angry fish.

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  13. The boy and the robot were playing and the robot suddenly collasped because it had run out of lights. The boy went and got another light and it was the last one. So they went and tried to find some more lights in the sea. They found heaps and they collected them, but they went to get one and they saw a big fish. They tried to get away but the big fish got them and it ate them. In side there were thousands of lights and they couldn't get out so the lived in there and they played in their little ship. The end.

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  14. The boy and the robot were playing and then all of a sudden the robot ran out of lights and fell asleep. When the boy went to look for some more lights there was only one left so they used it and they went to look for some more lights. They found lots of lights and grabbed them and then they went into a pitch black place with one light. They tried to pull it off but it was one of them big fish and it ate them but that was a good thing because there were thousands of lights inside the fish.

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  15. "Where are we" said the robot "we got swallowed by a big fish" said the boy, they looked out of the window saw heaps of lights for the robot to eat and decided to stay inside the fish, "lets play with our toys" said the boy "ok" said the robot.

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  16. The little Robots batteries went flat, the little boy went to the fridge and there was only one left, the little boy came back to the robot and put the last battery in.
    "this is the last battery what are we going to do" said the little boy
    "go get some more batteries from the plants" aid the robot.
    so they got in their submarine and went looking for them they picked heaps but needed one more they found it at the bottom of the sea, when the tried to pick it it seemed to be stuck then they saw the big eye looking at them.
    "eeeeeeek" said the little boy
    "eeeeeeek" said the robot
    then the big fish chased and ate them and took them to the place at the bottom of the sea where their were heaps.
    The End

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  17. we were playing with my toys when robot ran out of lights the last light was a sea monster and it ate us all up but there was heaps of in the sea monster.

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  19. We were playing with our toys when my robot friend ran out of light bulbs so we went
    to get some more bulbs but we were swallowed buy a giant fish. In his stumic there were heaps of bulbs

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  20. one day a boy and a robot were playing and the robot fall asleep and then the boy looked in the cobourd and there were one light left so he took it and pot the light so after that they went to get more and a sting ray ate them but it was good because there were more lights in it

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