Writing Week 2

Limericks

Last term we wrote limericks. I would like you to write a limerick about someone you know. Be nice...

Remember Lines 1,2, and 5 rhyme and a bit longer.
Lines 3 and 4 are shorter and rhyme with each other.




23 comments:

  1. I have a very funny Dad
    Who never gets very mad
    He likes to eat
    And has smelly feet
    But he never does anything bad

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  2. I know a girl called Ciara
    when she was little she had a tiara
    she liked to wear skirts
    but sometimes preferred skirts
    but she doesn't like the name Ciara

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  3. There was a girl called Bella
    But her friends called her Ella
    She hated the name Bella so
    She changed her name to Elmo
    Her mother said " Naughty Bella.

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  4. There was once a boy from Hokitika
    When he played rugby he was a little rippa
    He loved to pass and catch
    Some times he was the man of the match
    He was a cool kid wearing his hood with a zippa.

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  5. There was a girl called Maclane,
    And she wanted to ride in an aeroplane
    There was not good weather
    but Maclane was clever
    She just took a ticket in the light rain!

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  6. Once there was a boy called tiaki
    Who smelled like tereaki
    Who drove his car
    He drove it near and far
    He was to young to have the car keys.

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  7. ollie ollie ollie18 October 2015 at 20:37

    Once there was a boy called Ollie
    and he liked lollies
    and more lollies
    then ate them.

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  8. There was a girl called laura
    Whose very best friend was paula
    As She walked
    She talked
    And that was the tale of laura

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  9. There once was a boy named Jude
    who walked into class with food
    As he ate his cookie
    Ms.Veale took a lookie
    and coverd himself with a hood.

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  10. There was a girl called Rosie
    She loved being snug and cosy
    Her mother says she grows like a mushroom
    And she sweeps her room with a broom
    She loves to listen to music

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  11. Ella from Awatuna was so so sad

    she waned a horse oh so bad

    her mum said no way

    we haven't got any hay

    that only made Ella very very mad.

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  12. My sister is a sloth
    she likes to eat broth
    she drank it all up
    then ate the cup
    now shes a moth!

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  13. I know a girl called Pyper
    She is Mega Hyper.
    She travels around the world
    on a pillow where she is curled
    and eats fruit because it is Riper

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  14. Ian lived in a den
    Named den who sat on a hen
    He had a twin brother called Ken
    And Ian and Ken mother and gut her lived in Aden named den

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  15. finn dreams of playing soccer,
    with ball skills that are sleeker,
    than Ronaldo's hairdos,
    and Messi's jerseys blue,
    snazzy shoes on to be a sassy scorer!

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  16. A girl named joelle
    Loves to run with her pole
    She run with her pain of sole
    and she end up in a big hole






































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  17. their was a gril named Cara.
    who had a frined called Tara.
    and Tara had a sister called Sara.
    they liked to play netball
    In a hall

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  18. Their was once a boy called Cam
    who thought he was a ram
    he went for a walk
    and stood on a folk
    so he used it to eat his ham

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  19. There was a boy called Sam
    who loved to eat his ham
    he had it on bread and on his head
    he fried with jam

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  20. There was a teacher called Ms Veale
    She uses a unicycle to go to meals.
    But one day so a girl
    she was in a curl.
    Her name was Sammy Teal.

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  21. There is a boy called rob
    Hwo was a snob he likes to rob and he loves to snor

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  22. Brennanrennan and mum22 October 2015 at 01:15

    We have a big black and white cat
    that sat on my favorite blue hat
    she fights with the dog
    who needs a jog
    but he falls asleep on mums mat.

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